8.16.2015

when there's so many "I" in your doings and sentences and not enough "you"

I am feeling like this,
I ate this
I drink this
I am angry!

I am tired
I feel lost
I have given up
I cannot do this anymore!

I am here
I am there

I will do this
I am doing this
I don't do this
I didn't do that

I got fed up
I am old
I know
I know
I know

I am here
I am not here

I hang on
I will hold on
I can't make promise
I don't know
I don't know
I don't know

I am sleepy
I am going to bed now.
You come rest here next to me
I would love that

1 comment:

Johnpaul said...

What a wonderful finish. Great piece! I I I you are so correct.

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